diff --git a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2411.section.md b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2411.section.md
index dfe5a8ad7c2b..13e11ab4c008 100644
--- a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2411.section.md
+++ b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-2411.section.md
@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@
 
 - [Cyrus IMAP](https://github.com/cyrusimap/cyrus-imapd), an email, contacts and calendar server. Available as [services.cyrus-imap](#opt-services.cyrus-imap.enable) service.
 
-- [TaskChampion Sync-Server](https://github.com/GothenburgBitFactory/taskchampion-sync-server), a [Taskwarrior 3](https://taskwarrior.org/docs/upgrade-3/) sync server, replacing Taskwarrior 2's sync server named [`taskserver`](https://github.com/GothenburgBitFactory/taskserver). Available as [services.taskchampion-sync-server](#opt-services.taskchampion-sync-server.enable)
+- [TaskChampion Sync-Server](https://github.com/GothenburgBitFactory/taskchampion-sync-server), a [Taskwarrior 3](https://taskwarrior.org/docs/upgrade-3/) sync server. Available as [services.taskchampion-sync-server](#opt-services.taskchampion-sync-server.enable).
 
 - [FlareSolverr](https://github.com/FlareSolverr/FlareSolverr), a proxy server to bypass Cloudflare protection. Available as [services.flaresolverr](#opt-services.flaresolverr.enable).
 
@@ -97,10 +97,9 @@
 
 - [Userborn](https://github.com/nikstur/userborn), a service for declarative
   user management. This can be used instead of the `update-users-groups.pl`
-  Perl script and instead of systemd-sysusers. To achieve a system without
-  Perl, this is the now recommended tool over systemd-sysusers because it can
-  also create normal users and change passwords. Available as
-  [services.userborn](#opt-services.userborn.enable).
+  Perl script and/or systemd-sysusers. This is now recommended over
+  systemd-sysusers to achieve a system without Perl, as it can create normal
+  users and change passwords. Available as [services.userborn](#opt-services.userborn.enable).
 
 - [Hatsu](https://github.com/importantimport/hatsu), a self-hosted bridge that interacts with Fediverse on behalf of your static site. Available as [services.hatsu](options.html#opt-services.hatsu.enable).
 
@@ -126,7 +125,7 @@
 
 - [Renovate](https://github.com/renovatebot/renovate), a dependency updating tool for various Git forges and language ecosystems. Available as [services.renovate](#opt-services.renovate.enable).
 
-- [Music Assistant](https://music-assistant.io/), a music library manager for your offline and online music sources that can stream your favourite music to a wide range of supported players. Available as [services.music-assistant](#opt-services.music-assistant.enable).
+- [Music Assistant](https://music-assistant.io/), a music library manager for your offline and online music sources that can stream to a wide range of supported players. Available as [services.music-assistant](#opt-services.music-assistant.enable).
 
 - [zeronsd](https://github.com/zerotier/zeronsd), a DNS server for ZeroTier users. Available with [services.zeronsd.servedNetworks](#opt-services.zeronsd.servedNetworks).
 
@@ -142,7 +141,7 @@
 
 - [Gatus](https://github.com/TwiN/gatus), an automated developer-oriented status page. Available as [services.gatus](#opt-services.gatus.enable).
 
-- [cryptpad](https://cryptpad.org/), a privacy-oriented collaborative platform (docs/drive/etc), has been added back. Available as [services.cryptpad](#opt-services.cryptpad.enable).
+- [cryptpad](https://cryptpad.org/), a privacy-oriented collaborative office suite, has been added back. Available as [services.cryptpad](#opt-services.cryptpad.enable).
 
 - [realm](https://github.com/zhboner/realm), a simple, high performance relay server written in Rust. Available as [services.realm](#opt-services.realm.enable).